Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Fun with Mountain...

A sight from a long distance,
I could see a Mountain with rocky substance.
It looked very huge and gigantic,
The feeling made me very panic.

I went nearby to touch and feel the rough side,
The fear in me grew wide and took a ride.
I looked on the side for a path to climb by,
All were rocks, they left my hopes dry.

I saw someone in the middle of summit,
Waving hands and asking me to try a bit.
Fear inside, braving outside I decided to try,
Keeping my first step and aiming high.

Step by step I progressed towards the top,
Keeping my spirits up, without losing a drop.
The fear in me hiding away in corner,
I started the journey before a way longer.

A Mountain of distress flew like a cotton candy,
Courage and hope came together in handy.
Always move ahead, don't stand and make a stare,
Life will be easy for those who dare.






17 comments:

  1. Definitely Mubeen, the dare to try, to aim for biggers things is nicely urged in this poem

    Much love...

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  2. Amen to that! Thank you for writing to my prompt!

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  3. "Keeping my first step and aiming high."...a good lesson for this life journey...

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  4. A Mountain of distress flew like a cotton candy,
    Courage and hope came together in handy.

    Loved these lines!! Well penned :D

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  5. I especially like your closing line.

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  6. What an optimistic outlook! Enjoyed this.

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  7. again another relatable, positive angle to the theme. I am smiling all over because of this and others before it. beautiful.

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  8. Rocking with the rock poem.Inspiring touch in writing.Perfect rhyming.

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