Thursday, March 10, 2016

Weird Feelings

Some feelings are weird,
They battle with me unprepared,
I am sure not scared,
With the tools I procure.

They haunt me like clutches,
The moment it comes and touches,
Some feelings are weird,
They battle with me unprepared.

I am aware I fought back,
I am conscious to tackle an attack,
Some feelings are weird,
They battle with me unprepared.

They went back to their cobweb,
To spin another weirdo step by step,
But my conscious arose and talked loud,
They pulled me back from the weird crowd.

12 comments:

  1. Feelings are indeed difficult to fathom at times..but hopefully are fleeting..like spiders

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  2. The repetition of those two lines is very effective here.

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  3. This is brilliant - no doubt there are some feelings which are hard to describe. Beautifully put.

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  4. Excellent metaphor! They will spin new ones if not tended to.

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  5. The thing to remember is that our thoughts and feelings are not us, just things we are experienciong..

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  6. Excellent. Our biggest fight is with our own selves.

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  7. Marvelous images of fighting the negative self concept. No doubt those villainous thoughts lie in wait for someone else who is not such a fighter.

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