Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Saint

Jobless jack was
Staring at the window;
Inside a man eating 
his full stomach like a hero;

Jack's Jaw
Itching to ache;
Seeing the jelly and jam
Waiting to in take;

The man called
Jack inside;
Asked him to sit beside;

He shared his plate
with Jack;
Made his hungry go back;

The man, then called Saint;
Jack thanked him
with no complaint;


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7 comments:

  1. vanderloostMarch 17, 2016 at 12:35 AM

    Nice

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  2. Roger Owen GreenMarch 17, 2016 at 2:27 AM

    very generous

    ROG, ABCW

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  3. MelodyKMarch 17, 2016 at 4:35 AM

    heartwarming! We all should do more of those good deeds..

    Have a nice ABC-wednesday-day / - week
    ♫ M e l ☺ d y ♫ (abc-w-team)

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  4. Jae RoseMarch 17, 2016 at 5:57 AM

    Clever use of language - really got swept along in the story and the flow

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  5. SusanMarch 17, 2016 at 11:16 AM

    Now that's a good story! I'm guess ABC Wednesday has something to do with its style and use of rhyme which carries me along like a ballad.

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  6. Sanaa RizviMarch 17, 2016 at 12:30 PM

    Love the use of diction here.

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  7. JoyMarch 17, 2016 at 1:34 PM

    Nice story.

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